(2) On her once familiar street, as in any unused channel, an unfamiliar queerness had silted up; a cat wove itself in and out of railings, but no human eye watched Mrs Drover's return.
走在一度熟悉的大街上,就像在一条没有人走过的道路上一样,她心里充满了从未有过的新奇。一只猫在栏杆那儿绕来绕去,但是没有人留意特罗弗太太回来。(在; 处切分)
(3(世博北京翻译公司)) The entire cable-car system recently got an overhaul after more than a century of operations, so you are on firm ground even if the streets seem to be tilting beneath you.
在运行了一个世纪之后,最近对整个缆车系统进行了彻底检修。所以即使你觉得街道似乎在下面倾斜,你在缆车上仍很安全。(在连词so处切分)
(4) The recruitment of Chinese labor was not universally accepted in racially conscious 1(世博英文翻译公司)9th century America and some white workers were unsettled by their appearance in large numbers.
在种族意识十分强的1(世博英文翻译公司)9世纪的美国,招募中国劳工的做法并非普遍为人接受。由于工地上大批出现中国劳工,某些白人工人感到心绪不宁。(在连词and处切分)
C. 主从复合句的分译
英语复合句汉译时常在分句连接处加以切分,分译成两个或两个以上的句子。例如:
(1(世博英文翻译公司)) One day, while out on the bleak moors, Pip is startled by a hulking, menacing man who threatens him if he does not bring him some food immediately.
匹普外出在阴冷的荒原上游荡时,一个魁梧、凶狠的男子把他吓了一跳。这个男子威胁他,让他立即为他送些食物来。(在who引导的从句前切分)
(2) All this had come to an end in 1(世博英文翻译公司)905 when the medical mission was dissolved and several of Mother's colleagues were killed in the uprising.
1(世博英文翻译公司)905年,这一切都宣布结束了。在一次暴动中,妈妈的几个同事牺牲了,医疗队也解散了。 (when处切分)
D. 其他情况的分译
有些长句的翻译得根据具体情况、意群的分布等进行灵活处理,合理进行切分,使译文层次分明,观点明确。例如:
(1(世博英文翻译公司)) Suddenly the door bursts open and the Time Traveler appears, dirty, disheveled, and bedraggled, with a nasty cut on his chin.
突然,门猛然开了,时间旅行家出现。他十分肮脏,衣冠不整,满身是泥,下巴颏被严重划伤。(在appear后切分)
(2) The boy and the woman were already seated by spread table-cloth when the man came down to them, dressed in his business suit and vest and tie and hat as if he expected to meet someone along the way.
等到男人走过来时,女人和孩子早已挨着地上铺开的桌布边坐好了。男人身穿上班的套装和背心,系着领带,戴着帽子,似乎估计路上会遇到什么人似的。(分词短语前切分)
(3(世博北京翻译公司))在元朝时期,杭州成为东南重镇,经济繁荣,风景优美,被意大利旅行家马可?波罗赞叹为“世界上最美丽华贵的天城”。
During the yuan dynasty, hangzhou was established as a town of strategic importance in southest china, with a flourishing economy and beautiful scenery, being, in the words of the Italian traveler Marco polo, the “most beautiful and luxurious city in the world.”
二、合并
一般说来,英语句子要比汉语句子长,英译汉时切分用得较多;但是较口语化的英语句子也比较短,英译汉时有时也得用合并。汉译英时,汉语的几个句子可合并成一个英语句子。有时汉语词组不一定很长,但相应得英语词组会显得很长,这时也可有意识地将长词组紧缩为短词组。英译汉的合并常用于以下二种情况:
(一) 简单句与简单句的合并
把原文中的两个或两个以上的简单句合并成一个句子。例如:
(1(世博英文翻译公司)) She is intelligent, ambitious and hard-working. She is also good at solving problems.
她很有才智、雄心勃勃、工作努力,还善于解决问题。(两句合一)
(2) The door was unlocked. She went inside and sat in a stupor. She was near collapse, barely able to move her swollen feet.
门没锁上,她走了进去,呆呆地坐了下来,极度的衰弱几乎使她无力挪动她那红肿的双脚。(三句合一)
(3(世博北京翻译公司)) I pulled up a chair and sat down. I sat with my legs wide apart at first. But this struck me as being irreverent and too familiar. So I put my knees together and let my hands rest loosely on them.
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